your words

I read what you have written.

Dunno why, i dun believe in what you write.

Although most things you mention sound good.

However, i think there is sth missing.

That's the signal tell me that sth danger is happening on you.

The soul and the feel you have in your writing has gone recently.

Then, i think...

You are just pretending that you are good.

But insides....hmm...